Augman's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Koalas Ep2: Enter Laveda]

Good art, Lip sync was pretty bad, it looked like the mouth shapes were layered at points, but if you fix that the animation would be pretty good. Although for the dialogue, I just couldn't take 15 minutes of it. after 10 minutes I was kinda done. I feel like these characters could be pretty good in some stories.

SvenReyter responds:

I know it's way too long for what it is.
The lip syncing is actually pretty good initially, but when I rended the whole edit together in Vegas the mouths blur pretty bad. I didn't notice as bad on my tv, but on the wmv it's really noticeable. The next video I'm going to try a higher fps. Thanks.

[Sleepycast animated #1]

Haha, nice choice of audio, nice editing, all you need is some backgrounds and shading would be nice.

duffosaur responds:

thanks for that i will try and add some in my next one

[Kawaii Kitten's School Life (FANIME) EP3]

Voices are pretty good. Good base for the art, but because the animation lacks detail, add more detail to the art.

InusTrash responds:

Thanks for the critique! But this series isn't anywhere near my full potential. This is a joke series

[Edwin's Cat - Outing]

Pretty good. Needs more movement.

[Napkin Disaster]

Okay story. Not very funny. Seems like there was almost too much detail. Lipsync could be better.

Geremicartoons responds:

Yea, the lipsync could use we work, and yea it took a lot of time to do it and I didn't even think to make some funny lines. But thanks for the feedback!! I'll try improving on more of my cartoons

[Nonsense Island (Scratch Design Studio)]

Please. For the love of god. Download Adobe Flash. Pirate it for all I care. Your animations will be so much better. I used to animate in scratch, Flash is infinitely better.

LachlanInc responds:

But I don't have enough money. Besides, I saw a few videos on how to use Flash and it is just tooooooo complicated for me.

[Fallout Multiplayer]

Use Swivel and convert it to a video file. Otherwise, keep up the good work.

Mikeburnfire responds:

Thanks for the advice!

[It's a Stone, Luigi!]

Some stuff was a little choppy, but overall, It was good. (also the tween at the end with mario flying in space kinda bugged me. Needs a little more animation to it.)

ConeZone responds:

Heya, thanks for the comment! :D Yeah you know looking back on Mario flying in space, I wish I wagged his arms or legs or something it looks really stiff. Appreciate your honesty man! :D