Wasn't very funny until I died at the last 2 seconds
glad I added that joke then!
Good art, Lip sync was pretty bad, it looked like the mouth shapes were layered at points, but if you fix that the animation would be pretty good. Although for the dialogue, I just couldn't take 15 minutes of it. after 10 minutes I was kinda done. I feel like these characters could be pretty good in some stories.
I know it's way too long for what it is.
The lip syncing is actually pretty good initially, but when I rended the whole edit together in Vegas the mouths blur pretty bad. I didn't notice as bad on my tv, but on the wmv it's really noticeable. The next video I'm going to try a higher fps. Thanks.
Haha, nice choice of audio, nice editing, all you need is some backgrounds and shading would be nice.
thanks for that i will try and add some in my next one
Voices are pretty good. Good base for the art, but because the animation lacks detail, add more detail to the art.
Thanks for the critique! But this series isn't anywhere near my full potential. This is a joke series
Lipsync needs improvement. Try keyframe caddy. Audio quality is meh. Hit file-publish settings-then crank the audio quality to max. Otherwise this wasn't notable, but keep practicing.
Pretty good. Needs more movement.
Okay story. Not very funny. Seems like there was almost too much detail. Lipsync could be better.
Yea, the lipsync could use we work, and yea it took a lot of time to do it and I didn't even think to make some funny lines. But thanks for the feedback!! I'll try improving on more of my cartoons
fantastically animated. Only thing, hit file, publish settings, and crank the audio quality to max. It will make you animations sound like they're professional quality.
yeaaa I keep getting flak on the audio, which I apologize for. That was a HUGE mistake : (
Please. For the love of god. Download Adobe Flash. Pirate it for all I care. Your animations will be so much better. I used to animate in scratch, Flash is infinitely better.
But I don't have enough money. Besides, I saw a few videos on how to use Flash and it is just tooooooo complicated for me.
Use Swivel and convert it to a video file. Otherwise, keep up the good work.
Thanks for the advice!
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